Lawyer Paragraph 🗃

So in Social Studies, we were to write a paragraph about how Iqbal's human rights were taken away. I decided to show how his rights were taken away and why they got taken away. Now there are four highlighted letters in the following paragraph below. By the way, this is a lawyer paragraph. These colours show a part of the paragraph which I will explain to actually make sense for you...

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Red ; State Your Point.

Blue ; Say Why It Matters

Green ; Give Examples

Yellow ; Sum Up

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The Paragraph

When Iqbal was younger he was sold, causing him to end up into bonded labour. When Iqbal was sold that meant he was no longer with his family, he didn’t even get an education. Why was Iqbal sold? Well, he got sold into bonded labour (at the age of four) because Iqbal’s father had no choice because he was unable to support his family. When a lot of us were four years old we were learning how to talk properly and playing at the park, well in this case Iqbal had none of this. Instead, he was made to do work all-day with only one break for lunch all at four years old. Saying that Iqbal could never play or go to school. It is known that the debt that should have released Iqbal out of bonded labour, which would cause Iqbal to go back to his family was never actually removed. Iqbal lost his human rights the main ones being, school and being held in slavery. Overall he lost most of his human rights except if they were applied Iqbal’s situation would be a whole lot different. Iqbal was a very strong boy and even though he went through a lot he still wanted to make the world (who treated him wrong) a better place not just for him but others around him or going through the same thing as him.

Iqbal's Story

If you would like to read about Iqbal click the PDF below :)

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