I'm Not Scared Of You, Mr. Essay 📝

Basic Introduction

Q/R:

Quote and Rhetorical Question 

(A Rhetorical Question is a question you don't want answered.)

(A Quote from text or should link to your story)

TAKO:

T - Title 

A - Author 

K - Key Argument 

O - Outline

Second line will have T and A together

T - Title  e.g 'The Merchant Of Venice'

A - Author e.g 'William Shakespeare'

K - Key Argument, Use words from the question, so what are you arguing?

~Describe a key moment that shocked or surprised you in the written text. Explain how this moment was important to the text as a whole.
-A key moment that shocked the reader was when Antonio agreed to pay a pound of his flesh to Shylock if he didn't re-pay his bond.

O - Outline, The three things you are going to write about. (Your Red, White, Blue Statement - See this to know what Red, White, Blue statement is.)

~Red, White, Blue (Describe a key moment that shocked or surprised you in the written text. Explain how this moment was important to the text as a whole.)

- Red: He was willing to die for money to give Bassanio.
-White: Shylock and Antonio hate each other.
-Blue: Shylock doesn't show mercy.

In the first sample paragraph...
-By The Way Forfeit means payed.
-If quoting someone use the author, who said it and act and line which is even better.

If we were writing our first paragraph for Mr. Essay...

"If you wrong us, shall we not revenge?". (Shakespeare- Shylock) " Have you ever felt like taking revenge? In William Shakespeare's 'The Merchant Of Venice' a key moment that shocked the reader was when Antonio agreed to forfeit a pound of flesh to Shylock if he didn't repay his bond. This moment was shocking, outrageous and fascinating. This moment was important to the text as a whole because Shylock and Antonio didn't like each other but still agreed on the bond, Antonio was willing to risk his life for Bassanio, and Shylock did not show mercy in calming his bond.




Basic Body Paragraph x3
Paragraph 1
P- Point
E- Evidence
E- Explanation
(How the Evidence proves the Point)
L- Link
(Link back to my Key Argument)
More of a meaning to PEEL
(Breaking it down)
P- Point - The moment when Antonio agreed to the bond was shocking because Shylock and Antonio didn't get along.
E-  Evidence - Antonio was a Merchant and Shylock made a living leaning people money with interest. While Shylock charged interest, Antonio lent money without interest and sconed (tell someone off) Shylock for doing so. He also spat at Shylock and called him a "cut throat dog."
E- Explanation - Therefore, the reader is shocked to discover Antonio and Shylock can came to an agreement about money lending. It is also shocking because when Shylock calls Antonio out for the way he treats him, Antonio tells Shylock that he will spit on him and call him a dog again. This treatment is not usual between people who make agreements.
L- Link- With treatment like this from Antonio towards Shylock, and a promise to be just as crawl in the future, it is shocking that they both agreed to the bond.



Paragraph 2
P- Point - Bassanio and Antonio were the best of friends, but what shocked the reader was that Antonio was going to risk his life for Bassanio.
E- Evidence - Antonio was willing to die for Bassanio because he loves Bassanio and doesn't want his friend to feel guilty, because Bassanio kept asking Antonio for money. As well as Antonio wants to take full responsibility for making the bond with Shylock. The reason Antonio couldn't give the money to Shylock in the first place was being Antonio's ships sunk, which had all his money a board them. Bassanio needed the money to get to Portia but if Bassanio made the bond with Shylock he couldn't of payed him back so Antonio made a deal with Shylock. Due to Antonio's ships not making it back, the bond he made with Shylock was to allow Shylock to take a pound of Antonio's flesh, so he didn't want to let Bassanio feel guilt for his death.

Mirror Conclusion ➡️ TAKOL

T - Title 

A - Author 

K - Key Argument 

O - Outline
L - Link
Breaking it down...

T- Title - The Merchant Of Venice
A - Author - William Shakespeare
K- Key Arguments - A key moment that shocked the reader was when Antonio agreed to a bond of pound of flesh with Shylock
O- Outline
1) Antonio and Shylock hate each other.
2) Antonio was willing to die for Bassanio.
3) Shylock doesn't show mercy.

To PEEL each paragraph ➡️ PEEL
P- Point
E- Evidence
E- Explanation
(How the Evidence proves the Point)
L- Link
(Link back to my Key Argument)

Example:
In William Shakespeare's 'The Merchant Of Venice' a key moment that shocked the reader was when Antonio agreed to a bond of a pound of flesh if he couldn't pay back Shylock. This was shocking because Antonio hated Shylock and promised to mistreat him in the future. Antonio was willing to die for Bassanio even though he begged him not to take the risk. Finally, because Shylock had never shown mercy and did not at the trial. For these reasons it is clear that this moment was shocking to the reader.

4 Ways To Write A Sentence 📓

The Adverb Start

Adverb: Adverbs modify verbs, adjectives or other adverbs; He drives slowly, She shouts loudly etc.

We use it to add interest and intrigue. 

How to use one: Adverb (comma (,)) sentence 

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Words that are adverbs

a. Quickly

b. Curiously 

c. Interestingly

d. Importantly

e. Firstly 

f. Often 

g. Almost

h. Remarkably 

i. Similarly

j. Significantly

k. Surprisingly

l. Readily 

m. Happily 

n. Consequently

Basically things that end in a 'LY'

Example/s

Surprisingly, everyone was at school on time.

My Sentences:

Surprisingly, Matthew missed all of his shots in basketball.

Seriously, why did Trump get to be the president?  

Quietly, They ran out to watch the rugby.

Recklessly, The paparazzi ran to see the celebrity.
Surprisingly, The Raptors won against the Bucks.

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The W- Start Sentence

We use it to sound thoughtful and knowledgeable.

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Words you can use:

a. Who

b. While

c. Whilst 

d. When

e. Where

f. What

g. Whereas

Word's that start with 'W' except why

Example/s

While the teacher was talking, Jack was watching YouTube.

My Sentences:

While Jack was running, Matthew missed the shot.

Where were the Trump supporters, Because Hillary was starting her speech.

When Mc Donald's ice cream machine broke, they all went to Burger King.

Who was the ref at the basketball game, they were terrible.

Whilst Richie Mo'unga was kicking, the other team was annoyed.

While the crowd was cheering, Giannis dunked.
Whilst I was talking on the phone, I got ready for school.

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Using Both

Seriously, why did Trump get to be the president? Who even considered it?

Quietly, They ran out to watch the rugby. Whilst Richie Mo'unga was kicking, they tried to not cheer. 

Surprisingly, Matthew missed all of his shots in basketball. What was up with him today?
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Begin With A Preposition 
Preposition; A word that indicates location or movement. 
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Words that are 
a. In
b. On
c. At
d. Between
e. Against
f. Over
g. Under
h. Before
i. After
j. Behind
k. Within
l. Far
m. Throughout
n. Near
o. About
You can add more

Example/s
Throughout the class, the students work on their writing.
My Sentences:
Within the basketball court, you could hear music.
Before we landed in Australia, I started getting my stuff together.
After boxing day, the stores were empty.
Near my house, there was a basketball court.
Under the box, was a mouse.
Over the hills, was a port where all the ships came in.
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Red, White, And Blue
 Use this when you need to give more than one idea on a topic.
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Words (Don't really need any)

Example/s
The idea of racism is memorable in 'The Merchant Of Venice' because of Shylock, Judaism and Conflict.   
The essentials of rugby are kicking, passing and tackling.
My Sentences:
When playing netball the main rules are, no stepping, no contact and three feet away.
At Karate the basics are punching, kicking and locks.
With Karate we do push ups, squats and sit ups.
My favourite food and drink is water, Caesar salad and pizza.

How Many Kyle Kuzma's™️ Will It Take To Reach The Moon? 🏀

So sorry about the layout of this so far, it is really hard to get the text above the book. Anyways in Maths so far we have been coming up with a big question google can't answer. I thought that I should mix basketball and the moon in my question, which gave me 'How many Kyle Kuzma's will it take to stack on top of each other to get to the moon. If you would like to see the steps and process I went through doing this please click on the presentation above. Feel free to comment and give me feed back, thanks.