Rainbows Writing

Last Week for writing we based it off our reading work. Our reading work was about Rainbows so the story is about some kids going to find the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow. The words that are in light grey are the words I weeded out.Here is my story.

Rainbows:

Once Upon A Time there were 4 kids called Nicky, Ricky, Kyle and Olivia. Hello, my name is Olivia did you know this is the story about the quest to find the rainbow.

As I woke up in my bed and i heard rain spitting on the window. I went into my brother “Kyle's room” and woke him up boy, that was hard. When he finally got out of bed I called Nicky and said “Do you want to come over?” She said “yes but can my brother Ricky come over too?” We sorted things out on the phone but she said we will be over in 5 minutes!

I rushed off to my room Kyle just stood there and watched tv. I put my rainbow top on and a blue Jacket with some jeans. Then my hair was in a perplexirty the knot all most took over my hole head. I brushed it out I nearly howel as loud as a wolf that hurt then it got there. Kyle just got dress. Bing Bong, went the door bell. I went as fast as road runner to the big black door. It was Nicky and Ricky!

Hey they I looked at the groud and they both had gum boots on so we can go on the quest to find the RAINBOW! My brother and I put our gum boots on too, and then we headed out the door. Nicky shouted ¨Look a rainbow!¨ Thats when Ricky got a idea he said ¨Hey guys lets go get the  pot of gold¨ Kyle looked at Ricky weirdly he said ¨What pot of gold?¨ Ricky shook his head ¨The one at the end of the rainbow¨ Kyle said with an embarrassing face on ¨Um... oh that pot of gold¨. Nicky shouted “LETS GO!” I said “to the hills.”

We ran and ran and ran as fast as lightng and skedaddled to the nice green hills. When we got up there the Rainbow moved so we ran across town. We all had to take a break we sat down for a bit and then countuied. Nicky said¨where d-did i-it g-go?¨ I said to Austraila!”Ricky said how do you know” I said ¨Um, Hello, rainbow tracker¨. We all throught how are we gonna get there well Ricky and Nickys Dad is a piolet so we could go.

 3 hours and five minutes later…

We chased the Rainbow all the way here now where is it Kyle said. I said look maybe we can see at the sky point. We got a bus to sky point I neary fainted because I was scared of highes when we got on the main floor. Kyle, Nicky and Ricky loved the elevater because it went super fast. The rainbow moved again but it looked like to…. MOVIE WORLD!!! Nicky and I cheered. When we got there we went on all of these rides also shopping and got stuff to help us find the raibow. But the Rainbow moved. This time America.

 15 hours later.

We all woke up from our sleep and we arrvied in America where we were going next month for our hoilday but then we had to get back on the plane and go to the Netherlands. 5 weeks later…. The rainbow went. We were all sad but then it came back again. Ricky stopped and said ¨This is a wilde goose chase let me search up rainbow on my smart phone¨” The rest of us just sat there and talked about if Rainbows could’nt be real. Ricky screamed and said really fast “ we can´t see a rainbow it is a optical aperception of an interaction between sunlight and water drops in the sky. It appears to the human eye as an arc composed of coloured bands of light.” That was from his phone. So we are stuck in the netherlands. No silly said Nicky, My dad will take us back home.

3 weeks later….

Nicky and Ricky went home. Kyle and I watched tv and I thourght to my self so Rainbows arn’t real after all.

Then the 4 kids learnt something about rainbows and took that knowleage and told all their friends at school. So the next time Olivia saw a rainbow she think about this fun day the quest to find the rainbow. The End.