This is my persuasive writing to my dad to tell him that he needs to be more healthy. Please give me feedback about it thank you!
Introduction:
Dad, Dad, Dad. You need to be more healthy like eat more vegetables and fruit. Mum keeps telling you to eat more fruit and vegetables ,so now I am writing a story for you. My question is do you want to be more healthy and get more exercise?
Paragraph 1:
Where to start first… oh yes, exercise. You don’t have to get really fit, but just be a bit fit. I think that you could run or walk Tarsa (the dog) around the block. Then she could get exercise too. I strongly recommend you to play a sport or you could join my Karate so I can watch you after my class, and hey you could even train with your friends!
Paragraph 2:
Mum keeps telling you to eat more fruit and vegetables. I have something to recommend, how about when you come home from work you can eat an apple or a certain fruit before you get a drink of coke. You could set up a game for yourself. If you eat 5 fruit or vegetables a day you could have any drink you want. Here's a fact! Something really unhealthy for you is that you skip breakfast or lunch or even both and that is not healthy at all. Like the saying mum says to me if you don’t eat your body is not getting fuel it is like not putting gas in a car what happens if it doesn’t get gas? It doesn’t go. So if you don’t eat food you get really tired because of lack of energy. So stop skipping meals it is NOT good for you at all.
Paragraph 3:
Getting sleep is important to everyone and their body, even animals like dogs, rabbits even horses have to sleep. If you don’t get enough sleep, you may, you may, you may DIE or just get really sick! Anyways adults need roughly about 8 hours of sleep each night. Children need about 10 hours of sleep. Sleep rest your body ready for the next day and yes it is good for you. Honestly you need to get a good amount of sleep. 7 or 6 hours of sleep isn't enough sleep so try get that 8 in.
Conclusion:
I think being healthy is really good for your body. Look at it this way you don’t have to see the doctor for a while , well that's if you don’t really like the doctor. If you are healthy you won’t have as much risk of getting sick in the future. So stay healthy!