Today For Cybersmart My Partner was away, so I made a slide explaining tips on how to not make your blog post private! Please let me know if they helped you or if I could explain any better than what I already have!
Kia ora Alesha! I liked reading through your DLO. You offered some clear instructions on how to make sure your post is visible and you also offered a context or situation as to where people might need to share there work, for example, in the school setting. I like how you applied this knowledge to something familiar for your audience.
Well done on getting this complete in a shortened time frame due to your partner being away!
Hello Alesha! Me and Summer like how you made this DLO1! It has a lot of color and has interesting information, may I ask how did you receive this information?
Hi Alesha me and azaliah really liked how much information you put on each slide to teach everyone how to make a good blog post. You did a good job with your pictures that you choose. :)
This is a great slide with heaps of really helpful information about not making blog posts private. You have made a really cool cover slide which makes the presentation appealing to read. Although there is great information on the slides, there is a lot of information on each slide. Could you spread the content across more slides to make it easier to read?
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Kia ora Alesha! I liked reading through your DLO. You offered some clear instructions on how to make sure your post is visible and you also offered a context or situation as to where people might need to share there work, for example, in the school setting. I like how you applied this knowledge to something familiar for your audience.
ReplyDeleteWell done on getting this complete in a shortened time frame due to your partner being away!
- Miss Birtch
Hello Alesha!
ReplyDeleteMe and Summer like how you made this DLO1! It has a lot of color and has interesting information, may I ask how did you receive this information?
Hi Alesha
ReplyDeleteme and azaliah really liked how much information you put on each slide to teach everyone how to make a good blog post. You did a good job with your pictures that you choose. :)
Kia ora Sharlia and Azaliah,
DeleteThis was a really positive comment on Alesha's work. What type of question could you ask her about her DLO?
- Miss Birtch
Kia ora Alesha,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great slide with heaps of really helpful information about not making blog posts private. You have made a really cool cover slide which makes the presentation appealing to read. Although there is great information on the slides, there is a lot of information on each slide. Could you spread the content across more slides to make it easier to read?